Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Children

are the backbone of every country. So, there are

people

who tend to believe that youngsters should be encouraged to initiate social work as it will result in flourished society and individualistic growth of youngsters themselves. I, too believe that

this

motivation has more benefits than its drawbacks.

To begin

with, social work by

children

can be easily associated with personality development because, during

this

drive, they tend to communicate with

the

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variety of

people

,

leads

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to polished verbal skills.

For example

, if they start convincing rural

people

to send their

children

to school they have to be

such

a convincing attitude along with developed verbal skills to deal with diverse

kind

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of

people

there.

This

improved skill will help them lifelong in every arena. Apart from

this

, the true values of life like tolerance, patience, team spirit, cooperation can be learned.

Besides

that,

young

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the young

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mind

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serve the country with full enthusiasm that gives the feeling of

fulfillment

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and self-satisfaction.

This

worthiness for themselves brims them with self-confidence and patriotic feeling.

Moreover

, going and experiencing multiple culture and tradition make their horizon so broad that add one more feather in their cap.

However

, It is truly said, no rose without thrones. Can the drawbacks of

this

initiation be ignored?

Children

go to school, participate

indifferent

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curriculum activities, endure the pressure of peers, parents, and teachers and in the competitive world, they should not be expected to serve society without their self-benefits.

This

kind of pressure might bring resentment

in

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their mind. In conclusion, I believe, the notion of a teenager doing unpaid work is indeed good but proper monitoring and care should be given to avoid untoward consequences.