Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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are the backbone of every country. So, there are
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who tend to believe that youngsters should be encouraged to initiate social work as it will result in flourished society and individualistic growth of youngsters themselves. I, too believe that
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motivation has more benefits than its drawbacks.
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with, social work by
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can be easily associated with personality development because, during
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drive, they tend to communicate with
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variety of
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which leads
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to polished verbal skills.
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, if they start convincing rural
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to send their
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to school they have to be
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a convincing attitude along with developed verbal skills to deal with diverse
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of
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there.
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improved skill will help them lifelong in every arena. Apart from
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, the true values of life like tolerance, patience, team spirit, cooperation can be learned.
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that,
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mind
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serve the country with full enthusiasm that gives the feeling of
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and self-satisfaction.
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worthiness for themselves brims them with self-confidence and patriotic feeling.
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, going and experiencing multiple culture and tradition make their horizon so broad that add one more feather in their cap.
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, It is truly said, no rose without thrones. Can the drawbacks of
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initiation be ignored?
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go to school, participate
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curriculum activities, endure the pressure of peers, parents, and teachers and in the competitive world, they should not be expected to serve society without their self-benefits.
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kind of pressure might bring resentment
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their mind. In conclusion, I believe, the notion of a teenager doing unpaid work is indeed good but proper monitoring and care should be given to avoid untoward consequences.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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