Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In my opinion,
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and women should have access to the same educational opportunities.It is wrong to discriminate against students because of their
gender
. But
however
,
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do not think that
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universities
should accept
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equal number of
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men
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and women. I think
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society should focus on
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the same educational
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resources
to
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males
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and
female
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females
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, improve
gender
equality, make each
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gender
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have equal opportunities. But in my eyes, having the same number of men and women in college can not make those things
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happen
.
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the contrary,
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think it may undermine fairness. In my own opinion, universities should choose
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who is more brilliant,
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should not be an assessment of
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or not to be admitted. The
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society
should make sure they
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provide
the same opportunity to everyone.
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again, different major may fit different
gender
, some major would have no enough male or female applicants or attract on one kind
gender
applicants
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the other, Some major
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great patience and other might require physical strength. If it
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there must have identical
gender
, it will confuse the society system. Universities should select the best candidates for each course according to their
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,people should
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matriculation
matriculate
because of their standout power
instead
of they are man or woman. Different
gender
should complement each other's strengths. In conclusion, the slecetiotion of
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student
should
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on their faculty and will,
gender
should not be
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a consideration
consideration
to influence the
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admission
criteria, in my eyes,
this
is an unfair thing.
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  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
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