More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
It is true that the obesity rates in most countries are increasing dramatically,
therefore
, some people
argue that an increase in high-fat ingredients' prices would solve the problem. However
, I disagree with this
solution due to some reasons below.
The most compelling reason for this
issue is that raising the expenditure of these ingredients is, however
, not an effective method. First
of all, since the convenience and tastiness of fast food, many youngsters are addicted to it. This
means that they are not ready to curb their appetite for junk food, otherwise
, they are ready to pay for these meals
despite of
the higher cost. Remove the preposition
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For instance
, according to a study, although
the McDonalds' outlets had adjusted their fare of snack
to the upper level, the consumer rate remained the same. Fix the agreement mistake
snacks
Thus
, people
are willing to afford those more expensive meals
.
It is also
noticeable that,
fattening feed is not the only reason for Remove the comma
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overweight
among Add a missing verb
being overweight
people
. Other habits, such
as laziness and skipping meals
, can also
lead to gaining weight. The most appealing example for this
can be, during the Covid-19 pandemic's lockdowns, families enjoyed eating and relaxing without doing exercises, which made the intake of food became harmful and resulted in fatness. Furthermore
, skipping meals
due to the intensive work can lead to overeating as they will be much hungrier later.
In conclusion, although
there are many practices for obesity, increase high-fat
foods fee is not a suitable choice. Correct article usage
the high-fat
People
, in order to maintain a healthy weight, should be encouraged to do physical exercises or to insert vital nutrients in their meal
. Fix the agreement mistake
meals
Moreover
, it
should be ensured to eat regularly so as to curb their appetite.Correct pronoun usage
they
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