Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and how serious are the consequences?

In the contemporary scenario, it has been often observed that
children
in many nations indulge in consuming greater amounts of junk and processed
food
items
.
This
can happen due to a variety of reasons.
This
trend
can have negative impacts. Both, the reasons and
its
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consequences will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with the causes of
this
damaging
trend
,
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there are three main reasons for easy snacking.
First
of all, these cost-
effctive
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effective
and readily available Fast
foods
and
convinience
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convenience
items
are found in local stores as well as large supermarkets,
thus
its easy availability makes it popular.
Furthermore
, the parents today have a busy schedule, so they lack time to cook meals.
Therefore
, they turn to these
type
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of
foods
that are easy to cook.
For instance
, packed
food
items
contain added spices and all the spices, it just has to be fried.
This
proves as a boon for working caregivers.
In addition
, thanks to the marketing of
such
products. The people, especially the younger age groups are attracted to these
items
thus
gaining more popularity.
Although
seems harmless,
this
trend
of fast
food
posses
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poses
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harmful and rather serious consequences.
This
type of
food
items
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item
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contain
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additives and
presevatives
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preservatives
which are not healthy and can interfere with
the
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intestinal well being.
Thus
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increases
risk
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the risk
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to
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stomach ailments.
Moreover
, these processed products contain
high
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a high
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amount of saturated fats
increasing
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risk
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the risk
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of obesity among
children
. Obesity, without a
doubt
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leads
of
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long-term ill effects.
Lastly
, packed
foods
do not meet the standard requirements for vitamins and minerals that are essential especially during the growth years of
children
.
Therefore
, the child usually lacks
the
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general immunity and strength. Studies show that 50
percent
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children
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of children
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who consume fast
foods
on a regular basis lack energy and are often lazy. All in all,
this
results in immediate as well as long term serious damage to health. In a nutshell, it can be said that the increasing
trend
of consumption of fast and
convinience
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convenience
convenient
products cannot be entirely reverted back but should be put under control to protect the health of the future.
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