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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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It is undeniable that many
parents
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 in modern society are wanting their
children
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 to achieve in life. Many
parents
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 are often said
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 their
children
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, if they try hard enough to do something, they will achieve anything. Form my point of view,
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 giving
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this
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message
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 is more the benefits, it can present some serious problems, described in the following paragraph. On the one hand, one of the important benefits of taking
children
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 to try to do something is that it can educate them that nothing in
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 world can be easily obtained without effort.
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, many
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 in Thai society are often teaching their
children
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 to try to save money on their own when they want to buy toys.
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,
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message
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 can motivate
children
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 to have
an intentions
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intentions
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 and a potential power which lead to achievement in their adult life. In theory,
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researcher
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 said that students who are learning on
complication
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 subjects can lead to
succeed
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 in their education rather than students who are learning only fundamental subjects because they must try hard to solve the complication problems which must use many hard skills
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 as analytical
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 and critical thinking skill.
On the other hand
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, some people think that giving
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this
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message
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 can cause negative problems,
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forcing
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children
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 to make something that
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is too difficult for them because many
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are
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 often expecting their
children
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 to be able to do anything after they teach.
For instance
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, many doctor families are often giving many difficult lessons to their
children
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 to do, and they expect that their
children
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 will try hard to solve lessons, but
children
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 cannot do it because it is too hard for them. In that case,
infant
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infants
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 tend to
stress
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problem
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. Another drawback, giving
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message
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 to
child
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 is that teaching
children
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 to only winnow to lose, for
children
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 will try hard
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for
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forget
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get
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 something, but if they cannot do it successfully, they will
regreat
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regret
 and blame
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themself
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. In conclusion, telling
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 to try hard to do anything to succeed offer the motivation to
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 in modern society, but it
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offer
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 to stress in
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 life.
Therefore
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, it is recommended that
parents
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 should not put
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major effort
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 their
children
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • achieve
  • try hard
  • positive mindset
  • self-belief
  • motivates
  • ambitious goals
  • resilience
  • determination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • failure
  • effort
  • hard work
  • seek support
  • individual differences
  • abilities
  • capabilities
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