You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbour

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Dear Neighbour, I am writing

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letter with regard to the parking slot which we have been sharing for the past few months. These days, I am finding a little inconvenience with

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practice. As you all know, my working schedule is a bit over time

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I always reach the apartment at 9:30pm. By the time I park my car in the parking area, one of your cars is placed diagonally over the marked line.

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caused me to place my car in some vacant places several times. It would be really appreciatable if everyone parks their vehicles in their own reserved spaces. As there should be a solution to

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issue, we all need to request our associative president for individual vehicle parking slots.

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, we may arrange a meeting

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our head by

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weekend to put an end, discussing each other's concerns and relevant ideas regarding

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problem. I hope

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information finds you really helpful. Your's sincerely, A

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task achievement

Ensure to specify clear examples of how the parking issues have affected you or others, to enhance the understanding of the problem.

coherence and cohesion

Consider breaking down the suggestions into bullet points or separate sentences to improve clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Make minor grammatical adjustments, particularly with phrasing (e.g., 'appreciable' instead of 'appreciatable') for better accuracy.

tone

The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is commendable.

task achievement

You effectively communicated the need for better parking practices and proposed a meeting, which indicates proactive engagement with your neighbours.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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