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It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#internet #communication #people #place #information
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Many
people
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 think that the
internet
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 is a great way of communication ,
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however
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 some don't believe that the
information
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 found on the
internet
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 is complete and reliable. In
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 essay, I will discuss both views as well as
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 my opinion. Nowadays,
people
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 rely on the
internet
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 to communicate with each other and
share
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information
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. There are many social media platforms, on the top of them is Facebook.
People
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 of all ages use it to connect with each other by sharing personal views or
content
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 like videos.
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,
people
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 connected to them on the platform interact with that by liking or commenting. Another way to communicate directly is using Facebook messenger to make individual or group phone calls and video chats.
This
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 made communications much easier and cheaper compared to the past and helped millions of
people
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 to get connected together especially if they don't live in the same city.
In addition
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, the
internet
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also
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 is very useful in doing research.
For example
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, you can write anything on any search engine like Google, and you will find an unlimited number of websites talking about
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 topic.
On the other hand
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, sharing
information
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 on the
internet
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 and social media has its limitations.
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, not all the
content
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 shared is accurate or true. Some
people
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 may
share
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 false
information
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 which misguides other
people
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.
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, social media platforms like Facebook display
content
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 and ads to each person differently according to the person's preferences.
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 makes a person only sees what they like and what they believe in and not see the other opinion or point of view, which creates bias.
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, if two
people
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 are searching for the same topic on the same search engine like Google, they will get different results based on their locations and their previous search history. In summary, I believe that the
internet
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 has made a big revolution in communication and knowledge.
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, it is everyone's responsibility to
share
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 accurate
content
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 and make corrections whenever is necessary.
Moreover
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, we should be aware of the
internet
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 limitations and rely on different sources of
information
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, like television and books, to get as much knowledge as we can.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Democratize access
  • Instant messaging
  • Real-time conversations
  • Credible sources
  • Misinformation
  • Unverified facts
  • Reputable news outlets
  • Biased opinions
  • Algorithm-driven content
  • Overreliance
  • Traditional methods
  • Search engines
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