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All children should be made to wear school uniform. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that school uniforms should be mandatory for all juniors. The proponents suggest that it offers numerous benefits like inculcating discipline, encouraging uniformity and increasing productivity among all the scholars.
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 opponents believe that buying uniforms can be expensive for parents.
However
, I strongly believe that wearing the same kind of dress in institutes has more positives than negatives
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thus
 , should be an integral part of school education. First of all, wearing a similar kind of attire in academies offers a platform where all scholars, irrespective of their financial background,
feels
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feel
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 the same.
This
 boosts their confidence,
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 a result,
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they do not feel inferior to others.
This
also
 helps them to focus more on their studies.
For example
, It is often seen that
pupils
 of
TLC's
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TLCs
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 and
FFCA's
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, which have a strict uniform policy, are more studious as compared to other juniors who wear casual attire. So,
this
 helps them in getting more productive.
Further
,
this
 enables the kids to overcome peer pressure. In
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 of applying the same dress policy for all
pupils
, the rich
pupils
 have the tendency to exploit others by wearing branded clothes and
thus
,
as a consequence
,the upper strata
pupils
 have a tendency to bully other children.
This
 could have serious results and
serves
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 as a big obstacle for poor people in getting a quality education.
For instance
, one of my friends moved from Vancouver to Calgary and enrolled her children in
TLC
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the TLC
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 academy. Because, owing to peer pressure in their institution, her teenagers were demanding branded clothes every month.
Thus
, the uniform apparel code serves as a help for parents and their children.
To conclude
, wearing a uniform helps in schools
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and makes
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 our future generation more confident and they tend to focus more on their studies.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the introduction and conclusion clearly summarize the main points of the essay, and maintain a logical structure in your arguments.
task response
Support your position with specific examples and develop your ideas more comprehensively to improve the clarity of your response.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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