Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, we all acknowledge that environmental issues might be the most critical
issue
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On the other hand
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problem
that has to be considered for these days. In Use synonyms
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essay, I will elaborate on both these views and conclude with my opinion.
There are various information that we got from the news, especially about the Linking Words
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For example
, we heard that illegal logging has a tremendous effect on Linking Words
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In addition
, ‘Seaspiracy,’ a film produced by Netflix, gave us an obvious perspective on how our fishing method could affect the Linking Words
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extinction
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in our societies.
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who have expertise in environmental subjects said that there would be a main Use synonyms
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climate
change. Having been investing a massive amount of money, Bill Use synonyms
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climate
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in these days and for our future. Various impacts could be happened: dangerous heatwave, a crisis of foods, drought, and flood (simultaneously happened) in a different area, and definitely the Use synonyms
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Climate
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said that there would be more extreme jeopardy if we only do a business as usual; we have to prepare for it and do some mitigation.
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task achievement
You provided a comprehensive response to the task, discussing both views and giving your own opinion effectively. However, it would be beneficial to elaborate more on your conclusion for a stronger finish.
coherence and cohesion
While your essay is coherent and logically sequenced, there are minor transitions that can be improved, such as linking ideas more smoothly between paragraphs.
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Supporting your points with more specific examples or data could strengthen your main arguments and make the essay more compelling.
introduction and conclusion
Your introduction clearly states the problem and outlines the essay's structure effectively.
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You provided relevant examples, like the Netflix film 'Seaspiracy' and Bill Gates' work, which help to illustrate your points well.