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some people say that it's better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #language #students #classes #matter
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there have been debates whether a small
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 is better to teach language to learners or others who believe that it does not important. according to my perspective,
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small
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 is better. while these points will be elaborated on in the subsequent paragraphs with suitable examples. to commence with, paying attention to all
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 is the prime benefit of small
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 groups to learn any language. the teacher can help to improve the performance of learners but it can be difficult for trainers in large
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 classrooms. if
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 do not clear their all doubts
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 it will hard to get success in their life. "the international school" in Canada teach approxmentily 10
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 in language learning
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.
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, with the assist of small
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 ,
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 learners get confident do not feel hesitation to talk with other friends but it can be difficult for them in a large
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.
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, there are a plethora of pros of bigger
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 sizes.
students
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 can help each other. they can perform different types of activities
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 as group discussions. it can be difficult for schools to hire more teachers if they guide in small
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 class. to epitomize, it was published in the newspaper about 70% of children learn plenty of skills in large
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classroom
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 including co-operation, communication, and other that can aidful for future when they will work in teams. to conclude, small
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 classrooms help to gain not only confidence but
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 improve weaknesses.
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 large
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 classrooms help to learn new skills, they
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 help to perform different activities.
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