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modern technology is changing our world This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures To what extent agree or disagree

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One fact to support the above statement is the way society has changed today in its method of communicating .
However
, along with ,benefits there are plenty of adverse effects on our culture’s too.
This
 essay will discuss both views in depth; because ,in my opinion, advancement has brought a lot of changes in our community. To commence with, the latest development in communication helps
people
 communicate with each other from any part of the world at any time;
furthermore
, it provides many options to talk with each other.
For instance
, video calling, email, voice-message, multimedia
messages
 are among some of the examples we can talk of. One relevant example is my grandmother today is adept.in using a mobile phone, it was a surprise watching her send
messages
 to her son using emails to communicate something unheard of 10 years ago.
In addition
 to
this
 , all I can say is that it has helped
people
 communicate without any trouble by removing the distance barrier and giving them the opportunities to convey important
messages
 in a jiffy( in a moment). For these reasons alone, modern technology is a big boon today for the
people
 of the world
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On the other hand
, the same technology has broken all the cultural barriers. There are reasons for it, where families used to meet each other at festivals to greet each other now they wish each other by sending
messages
.
For example
, video-calling, zoom call, multimedia
messages
 are among the techniques to see or record your message and share with each other. Community prefer to use
such
 methods to save time. To conclude, technology has brought the communities closer and given exposure to connect with each other during any circumstances,
on the contrary
, it brings disadvantages to our old culture and made
people
 adopt
this
 new culture.
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