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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments, Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. I To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

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There is no doubt that
people
 these days ageing more than even the past, the question is do the advantages of having elderly
people
 in the society has more benefits than disaduantagest In
this
 essay I am going to expain my point of view
also
 my extent toward the idea of having mor ageing
people
. In terms of advantages I would say that education experience is one of strongs reason in my opinion old individuals not only can teach us about thein experienced of life in general but
also
 allow us knew about the verious reasershes they did in the past to illustrate professor lind emad she is one of the best chemist in Middle East , she still teach her students about how to be successful in life
as well as
 how to find the perfect subject to entry in univensity.
Moreover
 the benefits does not stop there
Firstly
: old parents should learned their children the mistakes and to avoid the issues
secondly
: old
people
 tend to be more Knowledgeable
thus
 taking advices from them rather than youngest individuals .
In other words
 I might see little bit of disadantages of having old human in society even though davantages still Influnce on general .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ageing population
  • benefits
  • disadvantages
  • advantages
  • experience
  • knowledge
  • contribution
  • economy
  • society
  • healthcare
  • youth employment
  • community
  • intergenerational support
  • volunteerism
  • mentorship
  • increased demand
  • pension costs
  • social welfare systems
  • workforce
  • productivity
  • intergenerational conflict
  • technological adaptability
  • dependency
  • effective
  • skill development
  • employment opportunities
  • intergenerational solidarity
  • communication
  • lifelong learning
  • technological literacy
  • age-friendly
  • social policies
  • infrastructure
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