Due to development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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fact which I believe to be pivotal is the fact that the rapid development of big store markets in the nation, has impacted the small scale of business diversely. While some people believe that it is difficult for small
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to stay in the market, others assume that it leads to the closure of local
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development leads to
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potion of community as a boon and other for a curse,
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, in my opinion, it has not completely demolished the tiny business yet,
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it has affected their revenue. To commence with, a significant number of people think that the concept of
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has created difficulty for small entrepreneurs to survive in the market.The reason for
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change is big store markets provide a wide range of
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roof, including a full grocery line and other
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, to attract the consumers the stores run multiple benefits
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as discounts, home-delivery, different payment mode facilities, and a number of more. For all these reasons, it becomes difficult for local
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to compete with them.
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, others assume that
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big stores have become
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of the reasons for closing local
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and foremost reason is the range of
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is limited in local
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the consumers have to wait for long hours to get their order picked as the number of counters are less compared to
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a person has the option to pick the product and check its nutrients label before buying it, which is not available at
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. These reasons lead to the closing of local
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. To conclude,
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have brought the communities an advanced option for shopping, but have degraded the demand for
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in local
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. In my opinion, there are still some sections of our society who prefer to buy from their nearest
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as the vendors provide facilities to make the payment later.
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