In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do yo agree with either of these views?
When it comes to educating youngsters, in some parts of the world people believe that children should start their education at the
age
of 4, but in other countries, the proper Use synonyms
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for starting educational studies is at 7 or 8 years old. I completely agree with the Use synonyms
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view.
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age
of 4 is not a suitable circumstance. Use synonyms
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, it is because a child at Linking Words
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age
is too small to be completely disciplined by the educational system, which is necessary. Use synonyms
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, infants still need to develop their basic skills, Linking Words
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as proper speaking abilities. Linking Words
For example
, my nephew, who is 4.5 years old, is a late bloomer and going into formal educational set-up Linking Words
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early can cause him stress. Linking Words
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of playing and having fun for small kids and forcing them to go to school can have a destructible effect on them.
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, I believe the acceptable Linking Words
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for going to school is when youths are 7 or 8. By that Use synonyms
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, they are fully grown and ready for the Use synonyms
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In other words
, the knowledge of a professional teacher is crucial to their needs by the Linking Words
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they are 8. Use synonyms
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, more mature children are ready and need to leave home to be with people other than their family. Linking Words
In addition
, when they grow to the primary school years they are ready to develop more advanced social skills.
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small kids need to learn and be educated, I argue that the official learning progress is better to get postpone until children are more mature.Linking Words
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