In some countries, people prefer to rent a house than buy one. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a property?
There are trends in some countries that possessing a home is considered better than renting. I believe
this
phenomenon is attributed to the stability of the value
of houses
and this
has a positive effect.
The reason why the public in some countries regards owning a home as more beneficial than renting one is that a houses
’ value
is likely to be stable in terms of money. In many countries, the value
of money fluctuates drastically in response to the economy and there is a possibility that people
will incur losses. Therefore
, the value
of houses
is unlikely to drop steeply. Thus
, buying property is considered to be a long-term investment.
Regarding the outcome of this
circumstance, in my view, there are both positives and negatives consequences. As to the positive, since its tendency allows people
to settle down in a certain region, people
’s engagement in the local community will be strengthened. When people
buy their houses
for an arm and a leg, they avoid moving to other places, resulting in helping to tighten bonds within the local communities. For example
, in Kumamoto prefecture in Japan, a number of houses
were devastated by a heavy storm last
year. The residents responded in interviews that they missed not only their houses
but also
their communities that always welcomed them warmly
In conclusion, in my opinion, people
own their houses
because their values tend to be stable compared to money, and this
triggers/bring about a positive effect on the individuals.Submitted by yukappy.961106 on
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