Some people prefer to directly help or support people who need it in the local community, however, others prefer to give money to national or international charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Donations by empowered benefits to uplift the weaker sections of society. Several

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are of opinion that directly helping locals who are in need is beneficial whilst others are in favour of giving charity to domestic or foreign non-profit organizations. In my opinion, supporting a section

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is in your proximity helps to give a transparent view on the impact it brings

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, individuals who

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the latter, seek benefits in terms of financial security and recognition. To start with,

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consider sharing a part of their

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with the deprived in their locality as the struggle is visible to them every day. They observe their helpers

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example, housemaids, drivers, sweepers, etc. dealing with hardships of life to earn

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a living.

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, to contribute to their growth, numerous

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lend a hand by funding

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their children's education, marriage procedures, medical treatments, etc.

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, the impact on the impoverished is a tangible asset when they see the well-being of poverty-

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with their assistance every day.

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, in London 3 in 10 families take ownership of paying school fees for the children of their car drivers.

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, a bigger section of our society

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money to renowned organizations globally as they seek to complete their social responsibilities through a trusted source and receive

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regular small contributions, mainly the rich, pays a hefty amount in charity, which they expect to pass through a secured mode in terms of payment gateway and to a reputed charitable institution.

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, recently the Strait Times in Singapore reported that a large consulting firm funded "Save a Child Foundation" with 15% of their revenue as their corporate social responsibility. In conclusion, charity begins at home,

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,

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should start helping

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needy in their reach and see the outcomes.

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, the wealthy should continue to reserve and invest

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well-structured charities for a bigger impact.