In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

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Moving away from rural areas towards urban zones is becoming increasingly normal in many countries. A huge number of
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are choosing big metropolises to live in in order to improve their life´s quality.
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are moving to these places and how can be affected the
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´s public services.
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with, most rural
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choose to move away because they seek a better life standard that cannot be achieved where they live. The main cause is that in urban zones, the amount of hospitals or health-care attention centres is much more than in the countryside.
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, the quality is better because of the fact that it is easier to get medical supplies.
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, normally if someone has an accident in a
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, an ambulance would need around 15 to 20 minutes in order to arrive at the place while in rural areas the delay can be up to more than one hour.
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, the probability of getting faster health care is higher in the cities than in the rural areas. Something
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important to consider is that an overcrowded
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can create serious problems for the residents as a consequence that some of their public services may collapse . All cities are prepared to hold a certain amount of
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, when those numbers are surpassed delays in the transportation system or in the medical centres start appearing.
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, the subway system from the
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where I live
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can transport 150 persons between stations every 10 minutes. When I started using it two years ago, I used to get in the
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car that arrived,
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nowadays it´s normal that I have to wait
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until I´m able to get in. In conclusion,
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always try to seek a better quality of life, as a
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result
people
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are choosing to live in a
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instead
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of the countryside.
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is something that should be controlled ,
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some places can start having problems in their public system.
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