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Writing Samples /
Band 7.5

You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include: -Details about the meeting -The problem you face -What should be done

#complaint #hotel #organizer #company #-details #-the #face #-what
Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you're doing well. I am writing
this
 letter to share with you an issue regarding my accommodation at the hotel. In your
last
 letter, you told me about the accommodation and the room details which were booked at the Sea Rose Hotel. My complaint is about the room you booked. the condition of the room is bad and the situation of cleanliness is pathetic. I have to spend two nights here because of two session meetings so how could I stay here in
such
 a dirty atmosphere It may cause mental disturbance for me and couldn't attend the meeting with a fresh mind. Please take my submissions as first priority and arrange a better accommodation. I have only three days left please ask your team to contact me and resolve the issue as soon as possible. I shall be grateful for your kindness. Yours Faithfully, Kunwar
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Task Achievement
Consider providing more specific details about the meetings and how the issues with the hotel directly impacted your participation or readiness for these meetings.
Coherence & Cohesion
The letter flows well from point to point; however, ensuring a clear division of ideas into paragraphs would enhance readability. Consider starting a new paragraph for the complaint and possible resolutions.
Grammar
Although minor grammatical errors are present, they do not impede understanding. Proofreading for sentence structure and punctuation would further polish your writing.
Task Achievement
You clearly stated the purpose of your letter and succinctly described the problem, which meets the task's requirements.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your closing is polite and anticipatory of a positive response, effectively rounding off the letter.
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