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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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It is true that longer working
hours
 contribute to higher economic growth.
However
, I think that excessive working
hours
 will do great harm to employees and society, there are other efficient ways to boost the economy
such
 as the application of technology and improvement of management. Prolonged working is not always associated with economic benefits. Extensive research studies have demonstrated that extended
hours
 spent on jobs are closely related to
work
 stress and hurt the quality of life. When people suffer from stress, their concentration decreases rapidly and
this
 slows down their productivity. Because of
this
, some European countries
such
 as Sweden and Finland value
work
-life balance. Even though the workers of these countries
work
 the fewest
hours
 per day among all nations around the world, they have a higher gross domestic product. The family time and social life people enjoy after
work
 provide them with sufficient time to and recreate and
therefore
 they experience less
work
 strain. There are other important methods to improve economic output.
For example
, companies can introduce new technology to improve working efficiency and reduce
work
 intensity,
such
 as mechanical robots. Applying high-tech machines can not only reduce the cost of hiring manual workers but
also
 largely increase the number of products that the companies can produce. It gives rise to a growth in the overall productivity.
Also
, we can improve collaboration efficiency by improving management, thereby increasing overall productivity. In conclusion, I believe that it is vital to keep
work-life
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 balance, and with the deployment of technology and new management methods, we can assure both higher economic return and fewer working
hours
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic success
  • working hours
  • productivity
  • sustainable development
  • work-life balance
  • labor laws
  • efficiency
  • gross domestic product (GDP)
  • burnout
  • occupational health
  • technological innovation
  • industrialized nations
  • emerging economies
  • workforce
  • competitiveness
  • workplace culture
  • employee turnover
  • quality of life
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