Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think that changes have been very positive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

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Lifestyle
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means the way of living
life
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. Each and every person adapts to
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style of living
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does
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on various factors
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as education, society, friends and upbringing. The standard of living does play an important role in the success of every person. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate
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pros and cons of
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in the current
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life style
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of
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to the past.
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of all, I would like to illustrates the positive points of
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in our current living standards.
Pepole
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People
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decade of
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than our ancestors. In
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century, most
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the
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people
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high living styles. They are more aware
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their health and fitness which leads to
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mortality rates.
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, The Generation gap plays an
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integral
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the
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our lifestyles.
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, Our
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youngsters
are fond of
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technology
. Technology makes things
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and
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convenient
. New
equipments
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does
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provide more resources and more wealth with less expense.
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,
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are
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some negative impacts of changing our
lifestyle
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. Humans would
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prefer
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to eat more from outside
restrurants
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restaurants
rather than my home. More fast food leads
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diseases
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as obesity, hypertension and diabetes which leads to
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number of
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sickness
rate
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.
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to that, Our young population leads to drug abuse due to peer pressure which leads to more
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suicide
and
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morbidity
rates.
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, More use of
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machinery
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leads to less physical work and
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unemployment
. In
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context, I firmly believe that
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change is
necessory
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necessary
but it
shoiuld
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should
be limited. We need to be up to date with
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world but we should only focus on
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beneficial
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in
life
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Technological advancements
  • Globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Nuclear family
  • Extended family
  • Life expectancy
  • Healthcare improvements
  • mental health
  • Environmental degradation
  • Traditional family structures
  • Industrialization
  • Urbanization
  • Consumption patterns
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