People are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. They both have important and negative influences on our lives. Do you agree or disagree?

Advertising has a huge effect on our society nowadays both in negative and positive ways.

This

essay strongly agrees with

this

statement. On the one hand, people are influenced without even releasing it from various types of media

such

as social media like Instagram or Facebook, television, newspaper, and even a sign in the store. It has a positive reinforcement and indirect suggestion which are powerful ways to influence people's decision-making.

This

kind of commercial promoting can be found in everyone's daily life;

for instance

, when the customer queue by the till in a supermarket, the market might place the low-price near the cashier to impulse purchases the consumers. Either or online shopping where the company often put a large font for more expensive goods or label an item as the most popular choice or suggest similar outcomes under the heading 'people who bought that

also

bought

this

' to convince the crowd by

such

an intelligence marketing.

Thus

the advantages of advertisements are not only sale increasing for the businesses but

also

provide persons with diverse and tremendous choices for goods and services.

On the other hand

, the advertisement can become in a negative way by leading society to an inaccurate point whether fake news, exaggerated ads and propaganda. Those can mislead and defraud individuals in the community.

For example

, the Thai nation in the

last

decade have been brainwashed by propaganda from the government about the King and royal family; the nation was overwhelmed by the deception to control their minds for many years and it is deep-rooted in Thai public heads.

This

shows getting the repetition of sources affects us not only to create a wrong decision but

also

changeable the thought of society which is extremely insecure. In conclusion, advertisements have both advantages and disadvantages. It brings able benefits to the economy by raising the command and supply of commercial;

however

, it

also

suffers the crowd by misleading and untrue information.

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