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These days many people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages.

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Food
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 is an essential part of human beings.Nowadays life has become very easy to get readymade
food
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 rather than cooking at
home
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. Some
people
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 opine that eating outside is very easy and convenient and some believe a homemade meal is more healthy in all ways. Here, I will illustrate both views. On the one side,
people
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 argued that homemade
food
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 is very time-consuming as
people
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 are so involved in their studies and jobs and so on things
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 they don't have enough time for cooking.
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, there are a variety of options in ready to eat
food
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 while with homemade everyone indulged with few options.
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,in London in 2002
people
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 got sick while they had
food
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 in the renewed hotel named 'eat more spend less'' so a lot of
people
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 got
food
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 poisoned. Even though now café and restaurants are giving too much attention to their meal as healthy versions because the public has become more cautious about diet and parents are so busy so they try to eat outside rather than at
home
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. On the other side, some populations consider
home
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food
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 is the best option for everyone because it's super healthy so it is sure that
people
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 won't get sick who consumed their mother's
food
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.
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,
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, in a lot of ,countries
people
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 prefer tiffin services rather than restaurant's cuisine.
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, as we know covid 19 is excessively spreader everywhere throughout whole worldwide so community try to avoid to eat outside so in that case
home
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food
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 is the best. Overall, it can be observed that
home
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food
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 has many advantages as healthy way but the readymade meal is easy and convenient
food
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 to have.
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