It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that the
Internet
is an excellent way to communicate with
people
, but it is often said that on the
Internet
we can not find all the information that we need. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss both points of view and
then
I will try to explain why I strongly believe that the
Internet
is useful for everything. It is generally thought that by the
Internet
we can talk with
people
from all around the world and In my opinion,
this
is a great opportunity for everybody because we can meet a lot of new friends.
For example
, nowadays, there are several social networks where you can find and chat with
people
who live on the other part of the earth.
Moreover
, the speed of communication has sharply increased with the use of
Internet
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the Internet

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in fact today it is possible to know in real life what is happening wherever we want.
Although
someone suggests that
Internet
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the Internet

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is not the best place to find
informations
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information
pieces of information

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, I think that we can find all the knowledge we require.
In
addition
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,addition

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the use of the
Internet
is faster compared,
for instance
, with the encyclopedia or books due to the fact we only need to write the key-word on browser and we have what we need
instead
of searching among hundreds of pages. In conclusion, I think that
Internet
can be considered one of the most important inventions because we can communicate with other
people
from all over the world and
then
It is an efficient way to find information.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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