Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a
wonderfull
saying that says, 'all good things are meant to be shared with Correct your spelling
wonderful
someone'
. I Correct your spelling
someone
truely
believe in Correct your spelling
truly
this
philosophy that we should always share things, knowledge or information to help other people. Linking Words
These
view is contradicted by two types of human beings in our society. In Change the determiner
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this
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essay
we will talk about these humans as well as Add a comma
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outweight
one opinion over the other.
Correct your spelling
outweigh
Firstly
, I would like to mention that my parents taught me from a very young age that I should always share everything with others. Nothing in Linking Words
this
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world
is ours permanently. Use synonyms
Inspite
of trying to achieve personal gains for some research or a business trick or academics, we should always try to help other people who are interested in improvingCorrect your spelling
In spite
himself
/Correct pronoun usage
apply
herself
. My point to prove here is, as we are gods most unique and gifted creation, we should never forget Correct pronoun usage
themselves
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our
out
roots and try to leave Correct your spelling
our
this
place a little better after us. Linking Words
For instance
, Linking Words
lets
talk about Sir Issac Newton. If he had never thought about gravity or discussed it and openly shared his research on gravity with the Replace the word
let's
let us
world
, I am sure we would be living Use synonyms
in
a different age altogether.
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Secondly
, there are many people who believe that if they kept an important thing Linking Words
as
a secret, it will help them attain their own selfish benefits to Change preposition
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get
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getting
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of their Correct your spelling
ahead
competitor
. Fix the agreement mistake
competitors
However
, they don't realise the most important thing in life that if they start sharing the valuable things with others, the Linking Words
world
would be a better place to live and the amount of satisfaction that he/she will receive will Use synonyms
definately
outscore any other happiness in the Correct your spelling
definitely
world
. Use synonyms
For instance
, I had a friend who would always score better in exams but whenever I asked him any doubt, he would act like he does not know the solution. Later, one day he asked me to teach him how to dance and Linking Words
this
time I made up an excuse and left.
In conclusion, it is always better to share knowledge with others, as Linking Words
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world
will turn into Use synonyms
better
place if we stick together as humankind and try to avoid our personal gains for the larger good in life.Add an article
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite