yourneighbour keeps his animal in his gardenand they create problem for you.you and your family have problems with them.write a letter to your neighbour.

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Dear James, I hope you are doing well.The purpose of
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writing is to bring towards an outgoing issue.As we are neighbours for over a decade and share a mutual relationship,
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hope you will ponder over the situation. Jerry,your dog, is indeed an adorable animal. As we have overlapping gardens, he often crosses his fence and
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my territory.
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you tamed him well
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still
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destroy my garden by plucking flowers and eroding soil.
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of my guests, he barks
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them and
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to attack them.
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request you to control his actions. It would be better if you tie him with his belt or keep him in the cage.
Additionally
, you could put him
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separete
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separate
dog house as you already own it.It would be really nice of you if you
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him in some training
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to manage his
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temperamental
attitude. I am looking forward
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positive
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response from your side and hope for fruitful results soon.If
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things
doesnot
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does not
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move towards betterment,I am afraid
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will have to complain in society`s office.They will
then
handle the matter
accordingly
. Will be waiting for your prompt reply. Yours sincerely, jenny
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