You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it - Canon G60 Pro black with some other accessories, Yorkdale mall explain what has happened - This camera was meant to my daily driver to take photos and after reaching and opening I discovered that charging cable, spare battries as well as stand is missing from the box say what you want him/her to do about it - want to contact local shop here in the London and ask them to provide me with either a new camera kit or missing components.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope that you are doing well. The purpose of
this
letter is to notify you about my recent purchase of a camera Linking Words
of
your company.
First and foremost, the model of the device is Canon G60 Pro, The DHRU edition and I bought it from the Yorkdale Mall located in North York. Change preposition
from
Along with
the product, I Linking Words
also
purchased a few Linking Words
addtional
accessories to enhance the experience, like two additional Correct your spelling
additional
batteries
packs, a charging cord Change the noun form
battery
as well as
a Linking Words
35 inch
stand.
Add a hyphen
35-inch
However
, as Linking Words
this
device was meant to be my daily driver for my trip to the London city in the UK, I did not Linking Words
unboxed
it until I reached Change the verb form
unbox
to
my Change preposition
apply
desination
. And that's when I discovered that all my extras Correct your spelling
destination
are
not in the box, Wrong verb form
were
then
not only I Linking Words
checked
the box but Wrong verb form
check
also
my suitcase so find anything, but I could not find them.
Linking Words
Therefore
, I would like to request Linking Words
for
an immediate Change preposition
apply
deliver
of all the missing items to me or else arrange it from Replace the word
delivery
local
dealer.
I hope that you understand my Add an article
a local
frustation
and arrange all the parts for me.
Sincerely,
Ruchin PatelCorrect your spelling
frustration
Submitted by ruchin27 on
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task achievement
Clarify the specific items missing from the box and provide more context to your request.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a smooth flow between introduction and body paragraphs for better coherence.
task achievement
You clearly mentioned the camera model and where it was purchased.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing statements are appropriate.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite