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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

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With the advent of modern technologies today, we are able to read
books
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 and news online via various websites and applications. As
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, many publishers nowadays publish electronic
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 of these materials along with
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physical
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.
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, to say that nobody will buy printed
newspapers
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 or
books
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 is not entirely accurate as there will be certain niches of
people
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 that would prefer to use the printed
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 of these resources.
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, there are other considerations apart from
money
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 that lead to
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 utilizing the electronic
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 of
books
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 and
newspapers
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. As
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, whilst I agree to a large extent with the statement that in the future, nobody will buy printed
newspapers
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 or
books
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 because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying, I still believe that money is not the only consideration that
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 take into account and that there will be certain niches of
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 where
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 statement will not hold true. There are many merits to using the electronic
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 of
newspapers
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 and
books
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. One of
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 is that it will be cheaper as consumers do not have to pay for the costs of printing, transportation and distribution as within seconds, the materials can be downloaded from the internet to the computer.
Furthermore
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, until now, most publishers and
newspapers
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 were unable to prevent non-payers from accessing those resources. As
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, many
people
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 were able to get pirated
versions
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 of these electronic materials for free.
Moreover
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, using the electronic
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also
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 has benefits in terms of convenience as
people
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 do not need to travel to the bookstore or newsstand to buy their
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 of
books
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 and
newspapers
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 respectively.
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, consumers can possess many
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 and daily
copies
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 of the newspaper electronically without needing to worry about additional space being taken up from additional
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 as they will all be stored in one’s computer. As
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, electronic
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 of
newspapers
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 and
books
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 will continue to increase in popularity due to these benefits.
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, some
people
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 may prefer physical
copies
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 of
books
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 and
newspapers
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 as it is a more immersive experience to put everything aside and focus on reading them. It is harder to do
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 using the electronic
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 as various notifications from messages or emails could be distracting and take one’s focus away from reading the book or the newspaper. In many cases, reading the physical
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 lead to
people
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 retaining information from them better which is important for many
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.
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, for those in academia or students, physical
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 allow them to annotate and make notes on them easier compared to online
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 which
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 essential especially when they have many thoughts to pen down in a short period of time.
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, when we look at the argument that
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 will use electronic
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 as they will be able to read them without paying, it brings into question that if nobody pays, how will the industry survive? Even if there is revenue from advertisements like we see nowadays, it is unlikely that it will be sufficient enough to support the whole industry. All in all, it is evident that electronic
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 and
newspapers
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 will continue to grow in popularity due to the many benefits it brings upon us. As
such
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, the number of
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 buying physical
books
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 and
newspapers
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 will reduce.
However
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, there will be a certain few
people
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 who would prefer physical
versions
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.
Thus
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, whilst the prevalence of physical
newspapers
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 and
books
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 will reduce, it definitely will not become extinct.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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