Some people think governments should spend money looking for life on other planets, while others think that there are many unsolved problems on Earth. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Recently, there are many ongoing debates trying to reach a consensus on whether
people
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should give priority to solve the potential
problems
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on
Earth
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or to searching for a habitable
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in the universe.
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article will discuss both views and explain why I am more inclined to the former. On one hand, to those who side with the suggestion to find a new
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in the universe, the best approach to solve the series of
problems
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is not to face it. More specifically,
people
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had better move to another suitable
planet
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, rather than worry about the situation on
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. We must recognize the fact the mankind civilization really struggles on confronting various
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that can hardly reverse like global warming and energy exhaustion.
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, the time and money we spend on tackling
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problems
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are futile.
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, very small progress has been made even though we have spent fortunes on finding and applying a new sort of energy; since fossil fuels are currently the main
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of energy, we can hardly alleviate global warming.
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, settle down on a new
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is probably the best-case scenario.
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, considering the
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who maintain that governments should simply pay more to
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the
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. It is crucial to
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the known
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in advance. Due to the fact that certain environmental
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as deforestation and desertification have detrimental effects on the ecosystem, which is an indispensable part of the
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, we must stop
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issues
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from
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deterioration.
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, if nothing is done to alleviate these
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, they are going to kill all of us before we make our journey to another
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. As an important aside, base on the technology we now have, it approximately takes more than two centuries to build a spaceship
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capable of more than 7 billion
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.
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, there is no exaggeration to say that neither one of the plans can eventually be done if we focus on anything else but not the unsolved
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on
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. To conclude, while some
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claim that we should move to another
planet
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since some fatal
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seem intractable and others argue that it is of great importance to solve the
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before we do anything else, I believe that solve the known
problems
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produce the best outcome.
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