You have lost something on a bus and called the customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the item you lost • explain why you weren't happy with the customer service

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that I lost my

bag

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on your bus

last

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Sunday. I called the customer

service

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, I was really disappointed with your

service

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. The

bag

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brand is Aldo . Not only

this

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is an expensive

bag

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but

also

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I have some important documents in my

bag

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for example

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driver's

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my driver's

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license , credit card etcetera. The colour of the

bag

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is Black and the type of the

bag

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is a side

bag

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along with

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long strips. I contacted

with

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apply

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your customer

service

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regarding my

bag

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,and your staff replied to me in a very harsh way which was really disappointing for me ,even she told me she could not provide the

service

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because lost and found is busy . I would be grateful if you would help me to find my

bag

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because it is really important to me . And

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if you provide me compensation because I disappointed with your staff behaviour and

service

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. Please deliver my

bag

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to my home at no cost . Looking forward to your positive response . Yours faithfully Baljot Kaur

baljotkaur2510Sun Apr 28 2024

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Tone

Try to maintain consistency in the tone of your letter, ensuring professionalism throughout.

Sentence Variety

Use a variety of sentence structures to ensure your letter flows well and to improve readability.

Content Depth

Consider expanding on the consequences of the loss and the specific outcome you are seeking for a more comprehensive response.

Description

You have clearly described the item you lost and the circumstances around it, making it easy for the reader to understand the situation.

Structure

Your structure is logical, progressing naturally from the introduction of the problem to the resolution you seek.

Closing

The closing of your letter is polite and anticipates a positive response, which is appropriate for formal communication.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

187 words

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You have lost something on a bus and called the customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the item you lost • explain why you weren't happy with the customer service

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Some people argue that radio is the best way to get news while other thinks that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion?