You have lost something on a bus and called the customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the item you lost • explain why you weren't happy with the customer service
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I lost my bag
on your bus last
Sunday. I called the customer service
, I was really disappointed with your service
.
The bag
brand is Aldo . Not only this
is an expensive bag
but also
I have some important documents in my bag
,for example
, driver's
license , credit card etcetera. The colour of the Correct pronoun usage
my driver's
bag
is Black and the type of the bag
is a side bag
along with
long strips.
I contacted with
your customer Change preposition
apply
service
regarding my bag
,and your staff replied to me in a very harsh way which was really disappointing for me ,even she told me she could not provide the service
because lost and found is busy .
I would be grateful if you would help me to find my bag
because it is really important to me . And also
if you provide me compensation because I disappointed with your staff behaviour and service
. Please deliver my bag
to my home at no cost .
Looking forward to your positive response .
Yours faithfully
Baljot KaurSubmitted by baljotkaur2510 on
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Tone
Try to maintain consistency in the tone of your letter, ensuring professionalism throughout.
Sentence Variety
Use a variety of sentence structures to ensure your letter flows well and to improve readability.
Content Depth
Consider expanding on the consequences of the loss and the specific outcome you are seeking for a more comprehensive response.
Description
You have clearly described the item you lost and the circumstances around it, making it easy for the reader to understand the situation.
Structure
Your structure is logical, progressing naturally from the introduction of the problem to the resolution you seek.
Closing
The closing of your letter is polite and anticipates a positive response, which is appropriate for formal communication.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite