The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourages people from doing activities which usually involve very little risk. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More new reports tend to be sensational, shocking and unpleasant.

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around our surroundings and the world. I strongly disagree with

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statement for the following reasons.

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because they give bad news

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folks from

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activities, it seems a minimum unpleasant

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news to around the world

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, we can vividly know about what happens even without going to the exact place.

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crime news to the public

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our

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steps to avoid crime.

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aware of

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situations.

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, certainly, the broadcast gives more information about new things and technology

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thus

, more and more public obtain many advantages from

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lifting uphills ,

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the

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activities

conversely

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the public getting awareness and vividly explanation about crime, new stuff introduction, new virus and vaccination, these are the information is only received through the media, we do not have the other option to knows.

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,certainly, the newspaper gives a lot of data from the global

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,

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is not a dangerous one,

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is always giving more benefits.

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, I strongly disagree with

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statement, I hope the newspaper should

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vividly

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data

instead

of fake. I hope

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trend is conducive to the next generation.