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In the last decade, there has been a great increase in the number and variety of online courses available to adults. This has been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, however, other students see these courses as less effective than classroom teaching.

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Over the period of the
last
 10 years, a huge surge in the availability of
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online educational programmes for grown-ups has been observed.
This
 trend is perceived differently by learners. Many have appreciated and recognised its benefits, while others find these programmes ineffective in comparison to the conventional instruction method.
This
 essay will discuss the merits and demerits of distance learning. Correspondence courses not only provide the optimum education in the comfort of one's own home but
also
 according to their own chosen time schedule.
Moreover
, applicants can apply and pay the fee for the course from anywhere across the globe without even visiting the university personally. For an instance, an aspirant in Delhi can apply and join the online programme in any of the Canadian
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 without visiting the country.
However
, the biggest drawback of e-learning is less or a complete absence of teacher-student interaction. It lacks the practical aspects of learning and
thus
 encourages passive learning.
As a result
, students find it
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 effective method to attain the best knowledge. According to the recent survey, seventy
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 of the students enrolled in the online courses found it unsatisfactory. To conclude, the enormously growing attainability of online education has gained
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popularity among
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young adults. Many learners find it as a boon to continue their education at their own ease while many recognise
this
 as less efficient due to lack of practical knowledge associated.
Hence
, online learning has both
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pros and cons, it's the applicant's discretion to opt according to his requirements.
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