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Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest to protect endangered species and biodiversity?

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Despite knowing about
bio-diversity's
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biodiversity's
biodiversity
 importance for a long time, human activity has been causing massive extinctions of different
species
.
This
 essay will examine the main causes and loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to
this
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these
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 problems. The two main causes of
species
 extinction are change of their habitats and overexploitation of natural
resources
. When humans artificially transform the
environment
, they destroy the vegetation and animals
nature
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natural
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 habitat.
For instance
, to build new roads
people
 cut down trees and cement the soil, altering the
environment
. Because of that, a lot of
species
 die out.
Also
, when activities connected with capturing and harvesting
a
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apply
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natural
resources
too
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are too
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 intense in a particular area, the resource becomes exhausted.
For example
, too frequent fishing does not leave enough time for fish to reproduce and makes them disappear.
Thus
, human activities often deplete local flora and fauna and cause loss of
bio-diversity
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biodiversity
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. Some possible solutions to
this
 problem are protecting natural
area
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areas
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 and
awarness
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awareness
 among
people
. By protecting areas where human activity
us
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is
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 limited
abd
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and
 avoiding
over exploitation
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overexploitation
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 of its
resources
, we can save the untouched
environment
 and prevent
species
 from dying out. More, the
next
 step
fighting
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 bio-
divesity
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diversity
 loss is informing the general problem.
This
 way
people
 will be more
consious
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conscious
 of the
environment
 and won't overuse or destroy its
resources
. To conclude,
people
's that change the
environment
 have
negative
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 impact on the world's ecosystem.
However
, we can significantly lessen the extinction of
species
 by protecting natural areas and enlightening
people
 about
this
 problem.
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