Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest to protect endangered species and biodiversity?

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Despite knowing about

bio-diversity's

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biodiversity's

biodiversity

importance for a long time, human activity has been causing massive extinctions of different

species

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essay will examine the main causes and loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to

this

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these

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problems. The two main causes of

species

extinction are change of their habitats and overexploitation of natural

resources

. When humans artificially transform the

environment

, they destroy the vegetation and animals

nature

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natural

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habitat.

For instance

, to build new roads

people

cut down trees and cement the soil, altering the

environment

. Because of that, a lot of

species

die out.

Also

, when activities connected with capturing and harvesting

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apply

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natural

resources

too

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intense in a particular area, the resource becomes exhausted.

For example

, too frequent fishing does not leave enough time for fish to reproduce and makes them disappear.

Thus

, human activities often deplete local flora and fauna and cause loss of

bio-diversity

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biodiversity

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. Some possible solutions to

this

problem are protecting natural

area

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areas

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and

awarness

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awareness

among

people

. By protecting areas where human activity

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limited

abd

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and

avoiding

over exploitation

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overexploitation

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of its

resources

, we can save the untouched

environment

and prevent

species

from dying out. More, the

step

fighting

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bio-

divesity

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diversity

loss is informing the general problem.

This

way

people

will be more

consious

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conscious

of the

environment

and won't overuse or destroy its

resources

. To conclude,

people

's that change the

environment

have

negative

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impact on the world's ecosystem.

However

, we can significantly lessen the extinction of

species

by protecting natural areas and enlightening

people

about

this

problem.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Ecosystem
Extinction
Biodiversity
Habitat Destruction
Urbanization
Deforestation
Agricultural Expansion
Pollution
Contaminants
Climate Change
Overexploitation
Invasive Species
Nature Reserves
Marine Protected Areas
Sustainable Practices
Industrial Discharge
Carbon Emissions
Renewable Energy
Energy Efficiency
Reforestation
Public Awareness
Legislation
Habitat Restoration
Wetland Restoration
Coral Reef Rehabilitation

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