Influence of human beings on the world’s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of many species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest to protect endangered species and biodiversity?

Despite knowing about
bio-diversity's
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biodiversity's
biodiversity
importance for a long time, human activity has been causing massive extinctions of different
species
.
This
essay will examine the main causes and loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to
this
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these
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problems. The two main causes of
species
extinction are change of their habitats and overexploitation of natural
resources
. When humans artificially transform the
environment
, they destroy the vegetation and animals
nature
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natural
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habitat.
For instance
, to build new roads
people
cut down trees and cement the soil, altering the
environment
. Because of that, a lot of
species
die out.
Also
, when activities connected with capturing and harvesting
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natural
resources
too
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intense in a particular area, the resource becomes exhausted.
For example
, too frequent fishing does not leave enough time for fish to reproduce and makes them disappear.
Thus
, human activities often deplete local flora and fauna and cause loss of
bio-diversity
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biodiversity
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. Some possible solutions to
this
problem are protecting natural
area
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areas
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and
awarness
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awareness
among
people
. By protecting areas where human activity
us
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limited
abd
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and
avoiding
over exploitation
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overexploitation
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of its
resources
, we can save the untouched
environment
and prevent
species
from dying out. More, the
next
step
fighting
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bio-
divesity
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diversity
loss is informing the general problem.
This
way
people
will be more
consious
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conscious
of the
environment
and won't overuse or destroy its
resources
. To conclude,
people
's that change the
environment
have
negative
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impact on the world's ecosystem.
However
, we can significantly lessen the extinction of
species
by protecting natural areas and enlightening
people
about
this
problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ecosystem
  • Extinction
  • Biodiversity
  • Habitat Destruction
  • Urbanization
  • Deforestation
  • Agricultural Expansion
  • Pollution
  • Contaminants
  • Climate Change
  • Overexploitation
  • Invasive Species
  • Nature Reserves
  • Marine Protected Areas
  • Sustainable Practices
  • Industrial Discharge
  • Carbon Emissions
  • Renewable Energy
  • Energy Efficiency
  • Reforestation
  • Public Awareness
  • Legislation
  • Habitat Restoration
  • Wetland Restoration
  • Coral Reef Rehabilitation
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