International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

International
traveling
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is a hobby for many people and slowly becoming trendy among
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youngsters as well. Some people
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it is beneficial both for the visitors and the
country
.
However
, some dispute and say its opposite.
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essay will expatiate both
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and I will give my view as well. On the one hand, there are cons of traversing
such
as litter thrown by visitors, language barrier or can make
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image of a place.
Firsly
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Firstly
First
, when the traversers
visits
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a place they cause
lot
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of pollution by throwing garbage on roads and become the reason of traffic for the native commuters.
Secondly
, a
traveler
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can easily be
maniplated
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manipulated
by the clever
populce
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populace
for their benefit, if not familiar with the language which will not be pleasant for the
country
's image.
For example
, an analysis of
last
year shows sellers always ask for
higher
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price
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prices
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in return
of
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their
item
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from an immigrant. On the flip side, the
country
and tourist both
earns
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benefits like every
country
's some
percent
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of economy depends upon the tourism.
Moreover
, going on a short trip to
other
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another country
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country
,
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aids a
perosn
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person
to learn
language
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the language
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, culture and explore
lot
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of things
of
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that
country
.
For example
, stats
shows
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a person spends their 30
percent
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of pay on travelling. To sum up,
although
there
are
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number
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a number
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of disadvantages of travelling like pollution,
humiliation
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the humiliation
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of tourist but
still
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,still
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the advantages have more weight on its side as it helps to improve the overall economy of the
country
and helps a learner to learn.
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