It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
These days, dangerous diseases
such
as cancers, Covid-19 have put a lot of strain on the Linking Words
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care system. It is argued that the government should invest more money in illness prevention rather than in providing treatments for the diseases that have already occurred. Personally, I agree with Use synonyms
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notion because a healthy lifestyle is a key to fighting against Linking Words
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problems.
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risks as prevention is better than cure. Various ailments nowadays are direct results of unhealthy habits. Use synonyms
For example
, an unbalanced diet and irregular exercise may lead to obesity, heart attack, diabetes. Linking Words
Moreover
, there is a number of incurable diseases Linking Words
such
as HIV/AIDS, cancers,... cannot be treated completely by drugs and therapies. Linking Words
However
, these maladies can be successfully prevented from occurring by developing healthy habits.
Another justification is that raising public awareness towards the role of a healthy lifestyle is absolutely much more economical than taking care of Linking Words
people
who already got sick. Working out on a daily basis will result in fewer Use synonyms
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visiting hospitals, Use synonyms
hence
, reduce the budget spent on improving hospital infrastructure and equipment for medical purposes. A study, Linking Words
for instance
, shows that each person can save millions of dollars on illness treatment every year by living a healthy life.
In conclusion, I believe that spending public money on maintaining habits good for Linking Words
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is more preferable to curing Use synonyms
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's sickness. Use synonyms
Thus
, improving a better lifestyle should be encouraged.Linking Words
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