some people fail in school but end up being successful in life. why do you think that is the case ? what is the most important thing to succeed in life?

In the 21st century, human
life
is more complex,
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where as
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a group of people succeed in their
life
without being a good academic background. in
this
essay, I will explain my opinion and major tips for
success
in
life
.
To begin
, there are many people
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are
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in their
life
without
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in school.
for example
, in India majority of the prominent politicians are illiterate or
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in their schools. but they are
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in their leadership and even they
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.
firstly
, practical knowledge is different from academic score because without
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proper experience no one can apply it properly.
secondly
, taking
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brings people to create a new world in their surroundings.
Thirdly
,
life
is mixed with sorrows and challenges,
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overcome these problems win the race of
life
.
in addition
, most of the failures in
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system followed
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in their
life
that is
why they are winners in their
life
. Apparently, self-realization is the key point of enhancing abilities because understanding our own qualities make perfection in any job.
on the other hand
,
self confidence
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helps to overcome challenges
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life
and brings
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path for task achievements. admittedly, more practice
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more
success
in their
life
in spite of any difficult conditions in
life
. for an illustration, Alfred Einstein did more than 2600 times of practice in his theory of condom mechanism
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, E = MC square and at
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he found out the
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theory. In conclusion, there is a saying bird without wings
similarly
without hard work no one can
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.
Life
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lesson is more accurate than academic theories
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everyone needs a mentality to learn
this
challenges.
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