A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet, describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake.

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Dear Satnam, I am very thankful to you that you have agreed to stay at my home and take care of my dog. When I would go outside on holidays for three days. If you find any problem

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staying at my home, you can contact me on

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phone number 237896456. As you know, I have a dog, named Tommy. You have to take care of him as it is impossible for me to take him with me. Please provide him with

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at least two times a day. In the morning, he has a habit of going for walking, so please go with him in the morning. You need to see the list of my other household activities that are closing the doors at night for security reasons. And please put the water in the plants during morning time. These are the same duties you would keep in mind. Again, thank you so much for

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help. Best regards, Harsh

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greeting and closing

Ensure that your letter starts with a clear greeting and explanation of the letter's purpose. You've done this well.

logical structure

Try to maintain a clear and logical structure throughout your letter. You could further improve by more explicitly separating instructions for your pet from other household duties.

single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea or set of related tasks. This will improve the readability and cohesiveness of your letter.

complete response

Be sure to fully address all parts of the task, including providing detailed instructions and expressing gratitude. Adding a bit more detail about each responsibility could enhance your response.

suitable writing tone

Maintain a suitable and consistent tone throughout your letter. A friendly yet formal tone is often appropriate for this type of task.

greeting and closing

You did a good job in starting the letter with appreciation which sets a friendly tone.

complete response

You've clearly explained the key tasks that need to be undertaken, enhancing task achievement.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

162 words

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet, describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake.

In recent years, women's roles have changed dramatically. What changes have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive or negative

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. Some people believe this exerts a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

Some people think that young people electronic and computer games is helpful while the others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.