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Writing Samples
Band 7.5

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet, describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake.

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Dear Satnam, I am very thankful to you that you have agreed to stay at my home and take care of my dog. When I would go outside on holidays for three days. If you find any problem
while
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 staying at my home, you can contact me on
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 phone number 237896456. As you know, I have a dog, named Tommy. You have to take care of him as it is impossible for me to take him with me. Please provide him with
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 at least two times a day. In the morning, he has a habit of going for walking, so please go with him in the morning. You need to see the list of my other household activities that are closing the doors at night for security reasons. And please put the water in the plants during morning time. These are the same duties you would keep in mind. Again, thank you so much for
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 help. Best regards, Harsh

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greeting and closing
Ensure that your letter starts with a clear greeting and explanation of the letter's purpose. You've done this well.
logical structure
Try to maintain a clear and logical structure throughout your letter. You could further improve by more explicitly separating instructions for your pet from other household duties.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea or set of related tasks. This will improve the readability and cohesiveness of your letter.
complete response
Be sure to fully address all parts of the task, including providing detailed instructions and expressing gratitude. Adding a bit more detail about each responsibility could enhance your response.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a suitable and consistent tone throughout your letter. A friendly yet formal tone is often appropriate for this type of task.
greeting and closing
You did a good job in starting the letter with appreciation which sets a friendly tone.
complete response
You've clearly explained the key tasks that need to be undertaken, enhancing task achievement.
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