in the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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speculation said that, in the long future, all land transportation including cars, buses and trucks will become fully automatic or they can self-drive while

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can sit inside those vehicles conveniently. Certainly, that condition can lead to both positive and negative impacts, but in my opinion, in the

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people will benefit more if that situation

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true.

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the present days, mankind already tried several times

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technology and it proofed that safety is one of the major

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that we really want to overcome since there are myriads of

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caused by

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hard work eventually paid off, as the data shows that even though

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, but the incident rate was around what they had hoped for.

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condition can be achieved because some computer/Artificial Intelligent worked based on specific rules and

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with the help of their maps technology to ensure

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will drive properly. Another benefit

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is that people can increase their productivity rate. Stressful and

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is a fact that

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faced by individuals who live in big cities

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as Jakarta when they commute. Many of them probably can not do anything while driving, and

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a perfect reason for driverless technology. Everyone in the future now can have their own

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more pressuring while moving from one place to another place since their

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is already self-moving without their assistance. The obvious drawback is related to the workforce. At

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is one of the common

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and the number is quite large as land transportation is the majority transport.

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, the bus driver or truck driver

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to find another job and

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can lead

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big problem since many of them I reckon are not equipped with another skill.

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can slowly overcome

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situation by giving consistent training for them in order to give them other opportunities. To conclude, I believe that by having

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vehicle, it will bring numerous effect of good effect and it

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the bad. We can easily improve our quality

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when travelling and

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it will contribute lowering accident level on the street.

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, the unemployment problem can

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solved by providing more training for the ex-driver.