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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Environmental
problems
 are a growing concern in today’s world.
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people
 perceive that they have concern
towards
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the
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nature, but they do not follow the guidelines to protect the environment. Some proportion of
people
 argue that the major problem in
environment
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 is the loss of distinct species of plants and animals, while
remaining
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 argue that there are more important nature
problems
.
Firstly
,
decline
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the decline
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 in the particular plant species
result
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 in temperature getting
more hot
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 around us, which will result in
increase
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 in
the
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global warming.
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, there used to
be long
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 trees in every locality which not only provide protection from the sun, but these trees absorb a lot of CO2 during the photosynthesis process, which in turn will help in reducing
the
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global warming. As they are being cut down for various purposes,
people
 experiencing more heat from the sun. Farmers use animals for various purposes.
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, cows are used to plough the field, certain birds help indirectly by eating harmful insects in their fields. As they are becoming distinct, it is raising
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number of
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problems
 for them. They find it tough to spend
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amount
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 of money on chemicals to kill the harmful insects in their fields.
Although
 many
problems
 are being faced by various
people
 with the
extinct
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 of certain living organisms. Some say that
,
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 it is the pollution caused by the vehicles and factories making our environment
more
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worser
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worse
.
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, harmful gases that are released from the factories
in to
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the
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nature are causing serious health issues for the
people
 living around the factory. Pollution caused by vehicles and other electrical appliances majorly impacts
the
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global warming. In
this
 day and time, there
are
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number
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a number
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 of environmental
problems
 and we cannot
weight
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 which one has the major impact. As the citizens of a responsible nation, we should try to reduce the actions that
causes
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problems
 to
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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 around us.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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