Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The more the world

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develops

developed

, the more people concern about the necessity for

schools

when

children

can study at

home

using the internet. While I believe that

schools

are highly essential for education, I am

also

for the idea that students may learn on their own at

home

. On the one hand,

schools

are the places where have well-experienced teachers and friends from different countries. Obviously, teachers and

proffesors

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professors

from school are trained carefully for educating students.

As a result

,

children

may acquire knowledge more easily due to

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method of teachers.

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Moreover

,

children

have the opportunities to meet and get acquainted with friends at

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same age who can be their soulmates in the future.

On the other hand

, at

home

, they can take full advantage of the internet to study well. They may be able to find out

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huge of interesting information which may not be taught at school.

Therefore

,

children

have more chances for learning deep

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knowledge.

In addition

, almost

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useful information

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the internet has

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reasonable prices, so kids can study comfortably whatever things they

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. Many educational centres and groups,

for example

, are created through social networking online and become quite popular quickly for learners due to their extensive teaching resources and flexible schedules. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that

schools

are necessary places of knowledge-centred education, I’m

also

for the idea that

children

may learn as well as

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.