With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

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Oil
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exploration and development has increased recently and is likely to keep growing in the following years.
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phenomenon causes the area of the
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industry to keep expanding into undiscovered areas to have more resources.
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there are more disagreements about
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topic, in
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paper I will argue about how I partially agree. One point which I believe is deniable
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the
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sector is a key driver for the national economy. The industry provides many benefits including economic, community and environmental to all parts of society both domestically and internationally. While the potential locations for those industries have been met within a country, there is an opportunity to develop other parts of the world that
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been untouched and empower local potentials.
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, perhaps the strongest argument in favour of resisting opens up undiscovered areas of the world. It is an irrefutable fact that
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drilling
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a serious
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on our environment – especially on our wildland and communities. The
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is that air pollution produced by industrial facilities has a role as the “invisible killer” to people living nearby these sites. It can lead to respiratory, cardiovascular and other diseases. The
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impact
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is dangerous emissions fuelling climate change. And the
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is human movement and vehicle traffic from drilling operations can disrupt wildlife habitat. In reality, of course, the expansion of
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drilling areas cannot be preventable because of the huge benefits that can be obtained by the government and investors.
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, given the seriousness of the problem that it causes, I believe there is a solution to replace
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energy with sustainable energy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global demand
  • finite resources
  • energy consumption
  • exploiting
  • untouched ecosystems
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable energy solutions
  • geopolitical consequences
  • territorial disputes
  • dependency
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