Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that many

parents

at the present are often teaching their

children

to make their own

decisions

because they believe that making

decisions

of

children

about

matters

such

as food, clothes and entertainment can affect them, while some people think that allowing

children

to make their own options on

matters

can cause thinking about their own wishes of individuals in a society. From my point of view,

although

choosing things by

children

is often more benefits, there present some drawbacks. In the following paragraph, both views of

this

topic will be outlined in the detail. It is true to say that making

decisions

about everyday

matters

of

children

can cause persons who only think about their own wishes because the

decisions

of younger persons which are without good advice from

parents

will be negative affected them.

For example

, many toddlers are often choosing

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toys that have not

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advantages to them, if

parents

support their kids, it will result in the child becoming self–indulgent, and it is a disadvantage in the future of

children

.

Additionally

, it can cause

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in

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think that they can deal with many problems in their life, and

children

who have too confident often tend to be high ego

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.

However

, others think that it is important for kids to make

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about

matters

because

children

can learn from wrong deciding.

For instance

, many

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are often choosing the best things

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their

children

, while many

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often choosing

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things, as the result, sometimes they may make wrong choices in their life.

In addition

, it is an opportunity for

children

to participate in their own lives to practice

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, as the result, the toddle will be proud

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if their

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is correct.

Furthermore

, the researchers said that many

parents

who give their

children

the freedom to choose their own options

such

as food, habits and subjects in school can lead to a happy family, and their

children

can develop critical thinking

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and

creativity

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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that making their own

decisions

of younger persons can offer both the positive impacts and the negative impacts.

Therefore

, it is recommended that every younger should make their own

decisions

about everyday

matters

, but every

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of youngers should be guided by their

parents

.