Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

People have different views about whether or not the

government

should invest in the dimension of arts. Some critics do not agree with

this

kind of sponsorship;

however

, others believe arts should be the responsibility of the

government

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

Art

is one of the essential parts of our society. I am strongly convinced that the

government

should make an effort to assist in

art

development. The reason is that

art

consists of wide concepts,

such

as cultural heritage, the exhibition of

artists

’ work, painting, architecture and symphonies as well.

Moreover

, the inspiration of

artists

might come from the place where they are living

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, or the atmosphere and circumstance they are exposed to. These are the attractions that evoke visitors’ desire to travel a country because

art

reflects the culture, societies and people’s

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in any era. Once the

government

continuously finances

artists

and gives

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platform and resource to express their artwork, it might enable

artists

to stimulate creativity effectively.

Consequently

,

art

does not only enrich people’s spiritual life, but

also

vitalise the growth of the local tourism industry, and

further

expand the nation’s economy.

Nevertheless

, the subsidies of

art

are contributed from citizens’ taxes. These taxpayers argue that

art

should be sponsored by private donations because there are only a small proportion of people who indulge in artworks, particularly in the high society's elite. I’m addition,

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those who do not pay attention to arts feel that funding

art

is a wasteful and extravagant action. It is more acceptable for them to allow the

government

to allocate subsidies on other aspects

such

as education, security, health and low-income families.

As a result

, the restriction of allowance would lead to a negative impact on

artists

because they know their

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will not be supported and they might abandon their pursuit in

art

and

thus

, stifle their imagination and creativity. In conclusion, admittedly, it is really unfair and unworthy for people who do not emphasize and admire

art

.

This

is because they wanted to achieve instant benefits.

However

, in the long run, our society will gain more advantages through

art

, and continuously progressing and colouring citizens' life.