Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

People have different views about whether or not the

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should invest in the dimension of arts. Some critics do not agree with

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kind of sponsorship;

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, others believe arts should be the responsibility of the

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essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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is one of the essential parts of our society. I am strongly convinced that the

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should make an effort to assist in

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development. The reason is that

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consists of wide concepts,

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as cultural heritage, the exhibition of

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’ work, painting, architecture and symphonies as well.

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, the inspiration of

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might come from the place where they are living

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, or the atmosphere and circumstance they are exposed to. These are the attractions that evoke visitors’ desire to travel a country because

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reflects the culture, societies and people’s

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in any era. Once the

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continuously finances

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and gives

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platform and resource to express their artwork, it might enable

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to stimulate creativity effectively.

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,

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does not only enrich people’s spiritual life, but

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vitalise the growth of the local tourism industry, and

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expand the nation’s economy.

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, the subsidies of

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are contributed from citizens’ taxes. These taxpayers argue that

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should be sponsored by private donations because there are only a small proportion of people who indulge in artworks, particularly in the high society's elite. I’m addition,

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those who do not pay attention to arts feel that funding

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is a wasteful and extravagant action. It is more acceptable for them to allow the

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to allocate subsidies on other aspects

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as education, security, health and low-income families.

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, the restriction of allowance would lead to a negative impact on

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because they know their

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will not be supported and they might abandon their pursuit in

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and

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, stifle their imagination and creativity. In conclusion, admittedly, it is really unfair and unworthy for people who do not emphasize and admire

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.

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is because they wanted to achieve instant benefits.

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, in the long run, our society will gain more advantages through

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, and continuously progressing and colouring citizens' life.