The government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree?

Although
, many people believe that investment
on
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trains path would be more beneficial than spending money on roads. I think in
reverse
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manner and disagree
to
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the given statement. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs. Out of all the arguments of miniseries to expand railways
instead
of roads, the strongest one to prove my view is people prefer saving
time
in transportation and utilise it in a fruitful manner.
This
is to say railways are
more
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slower than
road
journeys and
also
for small travelling
train
take more
time
than by
road
which would
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as a waster of precious
time
. A good example
for
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this
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ahmedabad-
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vadodara
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expression way. if you
travell
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travel
from
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train
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it takes 3 hours whereas by
road
2 hours only and
also
by
road
yoy
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you
would directly reach your
destination
,
however
, by
train
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you
also
have to use some public transportation
too
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reach
destination
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and that
also
uses a
road
. The other reason to prove
my
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is in
this
fast life people
love
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to travel by
road
to explore each and every place that comes in between because it
give
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a chance to stop and enjoy more place rather than
direct
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destination
.
For example
, a person travelling by rail he directly stops at
destination
and he
don't
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have accessibility
other place
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which they might have visited and enjoy.
However
, I would not overlook
otherside
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other side
too.
To begin
with,
train
journey
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journeys
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would provide more comfort than
road
journeys in long runs as it has many space and sleeping cabins where
also
be available at
time
of booking .
Also
, driving a car for 2-3 days to reach other
destination
would be not good for health while by
train
it's give
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more relaxation.
Thus
, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that despite
of
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comfor
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comfort
and less physical activity in long runs, my reasons that
time
enjoying roadways journey would give more peace and enough
time
to enjoy new things in life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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