The government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree?

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, many people believe that investment

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trains path would be more beneficial than spending money on roads. I think in

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the given statement. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs. Out of all the arguments of miniseries to expand railways

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of roads, the strongest one to prove my view is people prefer saving

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in transportation and utilise it in a fruitful manner.

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slower than

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for small travelling

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take more

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as a waster of precious

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it takes 3 hours whereas by

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2 hours only and

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road

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would directly reach your

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have to use some public transportation

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uses a

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. The other reason to prove

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fast life people

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to travel by

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to explore each and every place that comes in between because it

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a chance to stop and enjoy more place rather than

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destination

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, a person travelling by rail he directly stops at

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and he

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have accessibility

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which they might have visited and enjoy.

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, I would not overlook

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would provide more comfort than

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journeys in long runs as it has many space and sleeping cabins where

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be available at

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of booking .

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, driving a car for 2-3 days to reach other

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would be not good for health while by

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it's give

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more relaxation.

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, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that despite

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comfor

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comfort

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enjoying roadways journey would give more peace and enough

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to enjoy new things in life.

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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330 words

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sustainability
environmental footprint
efficiency
pollution
cost-effectiveness
economic development
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air pollution
initial investment
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