some people believe that zoos where animals are kept in man-made environment should no longer exist in 21st century.Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

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are very popular facilities for us and most people have visited the

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at least one time in their life.

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, it is fact that some people argue that

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are no longer exist in the 21st century due to their artificial environment. Given that there are some negative aspects, I personally do not think

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will disappear for the following reasons. The function of the

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is not simple to raise money through the demonstration of

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it plays a role in protecting species.

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those who stand negative views about

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often propose to give

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back to their original place namely a wild environment, it is

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true that human beings are catalysts of the destruction of nature. According to the scientific article, around 3 % of existing natures and around 1,500 species are on the brink of extinction every year due to our daily habits. In

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sense, even if the

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is surrounded by an artificial environment, it is significantly necessary to continue to exist especially for those

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that are facing some risks.

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, the

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contributes to the education of children. Nowadays, kids have less time to play outside due to school pressures for study or development computers and TV games.

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in Japan, it is very common that the school especially at the primary level arranges field trips to the

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and students not only study about habits of

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can be aware of the importance of natural reserves.

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play a role in stimulating the sense of kids from various angles especially in the modern era. To summarize, for the above reasons I do not think

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disappear in the 21st century, rather they should exist since they have a lot of merits as I aforementioned. What people always should take into account is not simply to criticise

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, but it is necessary to see and resolve the bottlenecks of the reason why we need

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.