Some people think governments should spend money looking for life on other planets, while others think that there are many unsolved problems on earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people believe that
the
governments should invest money to explore the existence of life on other planets, whilst others think that there are numerous issues on the earth that could be resolved with that budget. In my opinion, there are countless people on earth starving to death due to poverty which is the need of the hour that every government should heavily focus on. Correct article usage
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Although
advancements in technology is
important but in terms of budgeting, Change the verb form
are
this
should be deprioritized over the former.
To start with, countless students on this
globe are interested in researching about
various planets as a part of their studies and their keenness in scientific innovations. Change preposition
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Moreover
, to fulfil such
objectives, there is a large monetary reserve for science & technology with the councils. Each country assists their students to move forward in this
space by equipping them with expensive tools and services as required. For example
, recently, The Strait Times of Singapore reported that six students from National
University of Singapore invented a pencil that can be used in space for which the university Correct article usage
the National
had
spend S$200,000.
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tohad
On the other hand
, the developing countries records
an exponential rise in the percentage of people dying due to malnutrition every year. Change the verb form
record
Although
this
number is wrongly reported by a few countries to not highlight the declining growth, but
the death rate due to poverty is Remove the conjunction
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a
contrary evidence of the same. Remove the article
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Furthermore
, instead
of spending on the development of the poverty-stricken, the local corporations utilize that money to either fill up their pockets or spend on something such
as building
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the building
of
temples and worship places that brings them recognition immediately rather than progressively. These savings could be used to create better earning capacities for the impoverished. Change preposition
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For instance
, in 2019 a state in India reported an expenditure of about $500,000 in building a Hindu temple which was opposed by the Muslim community.
In conclusion, it is beneficial to allocate public funds primarily to uplift the deprived section of the
society. Correct article usage
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Nevertheless
, a lesser proportion of the funding shall be granted to the upcoming scientists to boost their career aspirations as well.Submitted by shital.sol05 on
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