You have recently moved to a new neighbourhood and would like to join a sports centre there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, introduce yourself say why are you interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to get some information about your sports club. I am twenty years old person and just moved here a month ago. I was looking for a recreational centre and found your sports centre which I want to join.
I have been playing different sports since childhood and have a tremendous interest in cricket. Because of my passion for games, have won a lot of trophies and championships. If get a chance to join your club, then
would like to start cricket again and make my career in it. Therefore
, I would like to know about different facilities, so as soon as I can join and participate in your club. Even, please provide me with the details of the membership plan and its terms, so I can become a member as soon as possible.
If you require any documents to become a member, please let me know. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
AnkitSubmitted by ap064911 on
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coherence cohesion
The letter overall is well-structured, but make sure each paragraph expresses a single clear idea. For instance, consider separating the part about your sports achievements and your questions about the club into two distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
Ensure all sentences are complete and clear. For example, the sentence 'Because of my passion for games, have won a lot of trophies and championships,' should be 'Because of my passion for games, I have won a lot of trophies and championships.'
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and formal, suitable for a letter to a sports club manager.
task achievement
The letter includes a clear introduction, explanation of interest, and specific questions, which shows good task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Greeting and closing are appropriately used and courteous.