Some people consider art to be essential and others think it is not. Which view do you agree with and why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Although

some people consider a major role for

art

in human's lives, some others argue that

this

area has no significance in our lives and can be ignored. I completely agree that

this

industry is worthy and vital for mankind.

Firstly

, artworks are believed to be the food of

mind

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.

In other words

, we feed our body to function effectively, we

also

have to pay attention to our mental food as well. The benefits of many artistic skills

such

as music and painting are apparent through many studies made by scientists. Through the results, these activities relieve us from tension and promote our concentration.

For example

, we can see lots of study sounds that are made to ease concentrating. Even, hens would breed more while listening to music.

That is

why

art

can increase productivity and lead to better results in our everyday activities.

Secondly

, engaging in

art

-related works affects

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society

as well. As

art

can purify our souls and release us from sinister thoughts.

This

in turn leads to more safety and fewer criminals.

In addition

, an

art

-lover

society

gives rise to artists exhibit their talents and gifts and admires them.

This

way, they will make a living from their abilities and be more fulfilled.

Additionally

, new job opportunities will appear and lessen the unemployment rate, which makes the

society

and result in a booming economy. While there are a variety of jobs that one can involve in and raise money, it is less probable to commit a crime. What is more, artists are respected and could remain in their field of activity and be paid fairly.

For instance

, if an actor does not have a chance to play a role, he would be obliged to another job

that is

not qualified in. In

this

situation not only he will be dissatisfied, but

also

the efficiency of activities would decline owing to disqualification.

This

is the way a lack of

art

could harm

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society

. In conclusion, I support skills namely music, painting, sculpturing and so on are critical as they not only enhance concentration and productivity but

also

boost the economy and increase the mental health of the public.