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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had huge negative effect on individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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Social networking websites are considered to have destructive consequences on
people
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society by the majority. I partially agree
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this
 statement and the reasons
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 my partial agreement are discussed in the following paragraphs. On one hand, it is indeed the fact that
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social networking has become an addiction. It means that the majority of
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 time of an individual is devoted to scrolling the news feeds and chatting with
people
.
As a result
, users are glued to
such
 sites as an immense pleasure is experienced by them when they utilize the features of social
media
.
In addition
,
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 fake posts and comments by some individuals
leads
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 to social disputes.
This
 is because since the
people
 of every country and religion exist on social
media
, it becomes the most effective platform to execute the intentional disputes among religions and societies by posting
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offensive
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.
For instance
, a post shared by an Individual of an unreal execution of
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 Indian citizen in an Islamic country
lead
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 Indians to protest against that nation which
subsequently
 was ended when that post was found untrue.
On the other hand
, there are myriad ways in which the
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exposure
 to
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social
media
 has been beneficial for both individuals as well as society.
Firstly
, the communication barrier due to the long distances between
people
 is eliminated. It means, no matter in which nation our loved ones are residing
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, they can easily be contacted through voice call, chat, and
vedio
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video
 calls on platforms like Facebook and
twitter
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.
In addition
, a feature of being able to interact with any person irrespective of the nation he or she belongs to
,
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 minimizes cultural gaps and brings different societies together.
Therefore
, social network usage has brought
people
 and culture together. In conclusion, it is indeed the fact that
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social
media
 has become an addiction and
also
 provides a platform
to
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for the execution of some severe disputes in society,
however
, the communication gaps are entirely bridged while bringing the different
socities
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societies
 together.
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