convenience food will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is little doubt that the advent of processed
foods
Use synonyms
have
had an effect on Change the verb form
has
more
traditional form of Add an article
the more
a more
meals
and cooking, Use synonyms
however
, it is unlikely that these more contemporary options will be the mere choice in the future. Linking Words
This
is an opinion Linking Words
which
can be supported below.
On the one hand, most of the lives have been simplified by prepared Correct pronoun usage
that
foods
, and Use synonyms
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consequently
they are considered a boon. Add a comma
,consequently
That is
to say, many individuals are occupied with their job and suffer from Linking Words
the
lack of time, and Correct article usage
a
also
conventional forms of cooking are Linking Words
time consuming
. Add a hyphen
time-consuming
Therefore
, many people tend to use packaged Linking Words
foods
Use synonyms
which
are available in every Correct pronoun usage
that
conditions
and Change to a singular noun
condition
pretty
economical. Add a missing verb
are pretty
Moreover
, they are so diversified and most of the ready Linking Words
meals
from all over the world can be found in a matter of seconds.
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On the other hand
, it is proved that even Linking Words
high quality
convenience dishes, which are produced by well-known companies, contain a lot of additives and preservatives. Add a hyphen
high-quality
Although
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such
ingredients Linking Words
five
the food pleasant Correct your spelling
give
flavor
and better texture, they influence our organism adversely since they are carcinogenic and if they are used consistently, they might lead to stomach cancer. To illustrate, my cousin who used to consume processed Change the spelling
flavour
foods
for a long period is on the verge of death because of cancer. Use synonyms
In addition
, it is indisputable that Linking Words
home cooked
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home-cooked
meals
are more trustworthy and healthy than industrially produced Use synonyms
foods
due to the fact that fresh ingredients are often used in cooking stages.
To sum up, from what has been discussed above, despite developments in processing Use synonyms
foods
, prepared Use synonyms
meals
are not popular among some people and they just complement traditional cooking Use synonyms
in
some occasions.Change preposition
on
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