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Many think that secondary and high school students should learn money management as it is an important life skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is an issue of controversy over the magnitude of money
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 skills in life to secondary and high school
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. While it cannot be denied that the ability to control their spending may bring them some problems, I completely subscribe to the opinion that its upsides would overshadow the downsides.
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 and foremost, educational programs about budgeting are deemed to be an integral part of young people’s making a good spending plan.
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 could have a thorough understanding of what is actually in demand to make a purchase, so they will come to a wise decision. Equally important, teenagers may derive the habit of saving money from financial
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 competence.
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, they are more likely to have better financial security, which
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 means that they can address financial adversities.
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, in the absence of
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 for people to pay for unexpected expenses, especially under urgent circumstances.
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, no sooner will secondary and high school
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 equipped with budget
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 skills than they could achieve a sense of responsibility in their own life. It stands to reason that they acknowledge that when they have a thirst for something, they need to save their pocket money to purchase it.
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 may result in the fact that teenagers may have a chance to acquire a feeling of accomplishment and fulfilment if they can attain their financial goals. In conclusion, with the aforementioned merits, it seems to me that the significance of educating
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 about financial
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 ability could not be underestimated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • essential
  • financial responsibility
  • budgeting
  • saving
  • spending
  • prioritizing expenses
  • debts
  • financial commitments
  • building a secure future
  • academic subjects
  • limited resources
  • financial literacy
  • specialized programs
  • qualified teachers
  • diversity of career paths
  • future opportunities
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